ShopDreamUp AI ArtDreamUp
Deviation Actions
A cold flame roars in my heart.
It warms me up, it tears me apart.
It lives in me, dancing on my grave.
I do not budge, for I am brave.
I feed the flame, I like the taste,
Of misery and pain, I feel displaced.
A cold flame lights my mind.
It freezes me, it makes me blind.
To all that’s good, to all of life.
Its in my back, like a knife.
I feed the flame, I love the flame,
It makes me die, I am to blame.
A cold flame feeds on my bones.
It makes me mad, I throw my stones.
I feel its power in my veins.
Like a horse, the flame holds the reins.
I feed the flame, I am its slave,
It is my rage, a fire within a cave.
It warms me up, it tears me apart.
It lives in me, dancing on my grave.
I do not budge, for I am brave.
I feed the flame, I like the taste,
Of misery and pain, I feel displaced.
A cold flame lights my mind.
It freezes me, it makes me blind.
To all that’s good, to all of life.
Its in my back, like a knife.
I feed the flame, I love the flame,
It makes me die, I am to blame.
A cold flame feeds on my bones.
It makes me mad, I throw my stones.
I feel its power in my veins.
Like a horse, the flame holds the reins.
I feed the flame, I am its slave,
It is my rage, a fire within a cave.
Stone
The stone mask breaks, and underneath
My face, it shines bright on its own.
No longer hidden, no longer trapped beneath
Layers oflies, freed from shields of bone.
The stone walls thrown down on the ground.
My heart and mind sing out: we're free!
No longer waiting, not walking around
looking at nothing. Here I am, its me!
I'll fly
Ego broken to pieces, build a wall.
Hide behind it, spy on all.
I make me whole, I rise again.
My past, a ball and chain.
I'll never be free, I'll never fly.
Let me leave, is my broken cry.
I cannot stay, I have to go.
I have my plans, I have my goals.
You're not included, I'm at the controls.
Don't try to stop me, you'll get hurt.
I'm done with you, no longer your convert.
My wings still broken, but no longer lame.
I am renewed, no longer the same.
No longer shy, no longer hidden.
I'll live my life, its not forbidden.
Its a new day, I'll be the hurricane.
I'll fly, I'll rise, I'll shed my chains.
Random thoughts
A dark sun shines, the sky is white.
The sun and stars, a deathly flight.
It's a madly peaceful sight.
Then light dies out and darkness wakes.
Insanity dances, no more brakes.
World in chaos, life’s at stake.
Hand in hand, we walk alone.
Observing from afar, hearts like stone.
We see it all, It's all we’ve known.
I do not fight, I do not flee.
I am part of it, and it’s a part of me.
The madness, chaos and insanity.
My mind in pieces, but at peace.
My body broken, I do not cease.
My spirit soars, like skeins of geese.
The King
A light too bright, A spark in the dark.
A peaceful battle, A violent peace.
A sane insanity, A madness sane.
Shallow depths fill the pit.
The madness roars, the spark ignites.
A light dies out, the darkness falls.
The traitor strikes, the protector dies.
Rising out of shallow depths,
Is a creature never seen.
So lovely, yet so terrifying.
An abominable lover, A heartless King.
A face so square, eyes so bright.
Darkness dies, Insanity ignites.
The shields of sanity break, the madness flows.
Bright light of day, never shows.
The King, He comes with speed.
He never stops, he never sleeps.
He comes to claim what has never been his.
All that you
Comments3
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
This is a very good poem a lot of the words rhyme to together leading to a great flowing feeling when said aloud.
it brings also to mind a lot of imagery which is another plus a lot of feeling it feels like someone is struggling with power and the feelings it brings fighting against greed but slowly losing however if they could use their strength for good rather then control they could become quite strong and just.
Great job writing and a hope you do more the world can never have to many artist no matter what people say.